New song I recorded (if you're interested)

[hbk_136]

"No Happy Ending" (B-Money Entertainment OFFICIAL) - YouTube

Just if anyone cared to take a look. I actually do try to use the feedback I get to improve. And no i'm not looking for a record deal, I just do this for spare time fun.

 

[Sn95Snake]

IMO it has potential. The lyrics were pretty good but the beat was just too slow for me.

 

[X3FBrian]

eh...

 

[JaysonMFK]

Good lyrics, agree with the other poster above about it playing a bit too slow. Thanks for sharing

 

[Njc0las]

Sorry no.

My feedback is that you're just talking your words with no feeling at all. You sound as bored singing it as I was listening to it. The vocals are also buried under the rest of the music. I'm not trying to be a dbag. That's just my opinion.

 

[Black Sex]

Speed it up. The slow speed makes it sound it's one of those computer voices.

 

[hbk_136]

No this is all good feedback, even if you didn't like it, thats what im looking for. Thanks fellas

 

[AznStanger3v]

I'm not feeling it.

You sound like the whitest dude ever attempting to rap. lol. I applaud your bravery though. Keep doing what makes you happy, regardless of assholes like me.

 

[03 DSG Snake]

:dw:

 

[fastford2004]

speed that shit up, way to slow

 

[hbk_136]

I'm not feeling it.

You sound like the whitest dude ever attempting to rap. lol. I applaud your bravery though. Keep doing what makes you happy, regardless of assholes like me.

You picturing me in an '86 Honda Civic with a backwards hat, baggy pants, and a shirt that says "your mom goes to college" haha?

 

[thirtytwovalve]

Agreed w/ above, speed it up. Kind of reminded me of this
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[61mmstang94]

 

[Svt4ever22]

The name of the song sums up your music career.

 

[hbk_136]

that actually made me laugh haha

 

[canibus]

You need to work on breath control. You're also forcing the lyrics to make them rhyme, it's not flowing at all. chorus was cool

 

[foofinator]

Alpha males use correct English.

People who don't, they just flip my burgers.

I actually did not think it was that bad. :thumbsup:

 

[Beerdog80]

Alpha males use correct English.

People who don't, they just flip my burgers.

I actually did not think it was that bad. :thumbsup:

I'm going to have to borrow this.

And I'll be another asshole. Vocals sound flat as hell. Might be good for this sort of thing...not a fan of this type of thing.

 

[2001GTTT]

the lyrics were good and had meaning, not like the generic shit you hear all the time. just needs sped up some and you're good.

 

[35THCONVERTIBLE]

Put some soul in it. Good corus