My website is done - designer critique

[mustangmiller]

I am a graphic designer and I am almost out of school. I have been working on my website for quite some time but this last weekend I have pretty much got it finished.

Let me know what you think. And if you need a designer I'm your guy!

Derek Miller - Digital Online Portfolio - Creative Print Design & Advertising - Photography

 

[01cobravortech]

Not bad at all chief. Good work.

 

[Ranman23Player]

Impressive site man.:thumbsup:

 

[pho_phizzat]

Cool layout Derek.

 

[mustangmiller]

Thanks Guys!

 

[lobra97]

it would look better if it looked a little more like this...

 

[F8LBITEva]

looks great. i like your notch too

 

[lobra97]

website is cool, easy to navigate it a big plus. nothing worse then trying to figure some dumb shit out.

i like that yellow flower pic btw, looks cool

 

[chinchilla]

looks good, only thing I don't like is the left-right scroll menu on the home page doesn't loop, it sends you back to the beginning. Other than that very cool and easy to navigate.

 

[Fox-4]

it would look better if it looked a little more like this...
lemon party - a game of bingo gone horribly wrong

:xpl: wft, thanks for the warning


OP, I like your site, its simple and clean.

 

[lobra97]

:xpl: wft, thanks for the warning


OP, I like your site, its simple and clean.

hahaha my wife and i were victims yesterday :lol1:
i clicked on it and we were both like wtf....

 

[VenomGTX]

it would look better if it looked a little more like this...
lemon party - a game of bingo gone horribly wrong

You should edit that before the banstick pays you a visit.

 

[lobra97]

You should edit that before the banstick pays you a visit.

will do . didn't know i could get banned for it. will do asap

 

[lobra97]

fixed, sorry admin

 

[mustangmiller]

looks good, only thing I don't like is the left-right scroll menu on the home page doesn't loop, it sends you back to the beginning. Other than that very cool and easy to navigate.

Yea I have been trying to make it loop but i cant seam to make it work perfect so i just gave up. I might look into it again.

Thanks for all the compliments everyone.

and the link.... well could have done without that haha

 

[JasonSnake]

hmmm,, your text boxes are out of alignment, especially on your contact form.

 

[piss&vinegar]

Nice work....What software did you use?

 

[wvmystichrome]

Nice work.

 

[mustangmiller]

hmmm,, your text boxes are out of alignment, especially on your contact form.

Might be the browser. I have had a few issues with it in internet explorer. Thought i fixed it. Will check into it. Thanks.

 

[mustangmiller]

Nice work....What software did you use?

I used photoshop for the design comp. Did the code in dreamweaver.