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Good Lord...FLMAO!
Op, write a script, proof read it, correct it, have a friend proof read it, than read off of cue cards.
Your vid and attempt at whatever, is a mess!
Or maybe bypass the whole video thing and type out an ad with pictures, dont forget to run spell check.
Hell even do a walk around video, just DONT TALK.